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I spent too long trying to make a loading bar to no avail so if it doesn't look like it's doing anything, it is! :faint:

An interactive story in rhyme! :la::heart:

Sometimes people make something out to be a big bad storm, when really it's just a shower :aww:

Spent the weekend at this - I drew one of the frames and thought of a poem/story to go with it and wanted to put it together like: - but there wasn't enough space!! ; n ;

So I had to become savvy in flash haha and it became a full blown story! :la: - oh shizzle I had homework? OTL''

Hope ye like it! :iconcoolplz:
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:iconflarekeeper:
FlareKeeper Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  New Deviant
Loved it!
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Dear-Raven Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014
*Gasps* Beautiful, dear. Beautiful!
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Kyrria101 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THAT WAS AMAZING LOVED IT
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:iconbexdoctorwhofan10th:
Bexdoctorwhofan10th Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is amazing! I will remember not to complain when it rains :D
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:iconxthewingedcatx:
XTheWingedCatX Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is very creative! I'll remember this next time it rains ;)
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:iconsnowwhiteak:
SnowWhiteAK Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cute and well done!
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:iconmissunderstoodgenius:
Beautiful and creative. Blogged it on missunderstoodgenius.wordpress… :)
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:iconminichihiro:
miniChihiro Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great, great, great! want to like it twice :3
true story, btw :D
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:iconxlizly:
xLizly Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's just amazing! :D
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot! :thanks:
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:iconmeltdown-kitsune:
Meltdown-Kitsune Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student General Artist
this is very good!
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:icondahanci:
DaHanci Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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:icontripplemega:
Tripplemega Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Excellent. I really think the art and the words work so well together that it is more than the sum of it's parts.
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Shocker7776 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That was amazing! I just discovered your poetry today, and I have read so much! It's great!
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:iconmewmewnya1:
mewmewnya1 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
I think this is amazing!
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:iconkopatlovesgummies:
kopatlovesgummies Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely :D
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:iconcasadrat06:
casadrat06 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
Aw, that was cute. :)
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sweetjazs Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
you should be an author,you have all the skills!!since im going to be an author one day,i would so help you publish this book XD
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rjcommando Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student General Artist
I don't know how I'm only viewing this now, but this was amazing! Such a great story/poem! Simple, yet moving, I love it!
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DarFacee Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lisa you're too talented :)
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:iconlulubellacalista:
LuLuBellaCalista Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This deserves a DD!!! I mean really.. How do you suggest them?
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Anyhow, wonderful job! :iconfoxhappyplz:
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veritas-found Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just. . .I'm about to start gushing. Seriously. This is just beautiful. The story, the art, the message. . .I'm in so much love right now. <3
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:iconlivonatori:
LivonaTori Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Found this amazing!
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:iconbthepuglover:
BthePugLover Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
This is so adorable and has awesome meaning. (I have such a broad vocab there, don't I :) )
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stkf Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
When I start reading, I'm always questioning what's going to happen next, what's the purpose, etc. Then as soon as I get to the end, those last few lines are like a punch to the heart. ...Well, that sounds painful, but I really love that about these works, and it always leaves me smiling and feeling more positive, even if only just a bit. So, thank you for this. <3
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handslikeice Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Interface Designer
This brightened my day so much! What a lovely story and concept, with such lovely work to go with it. Splendid! :meowL
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:iconcookierap:
Cookierap Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was beautiful and fun to read!! ;u;
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:iconkitana411:
kitana411 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm totally moved by this sweet little story of yours :iconsmilieplz: I think it's very quaint and quite lovely for the mind.
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:iconmsreadingqueen:
MsReadingQueen Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How did you make this?!
Its amazing!
Please its great because its like Irish weather!
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:iconmasquerader13:
Masquerader13 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
You have such beautiful words :)
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:iconpurplepuppies10:
purplepuppies10 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012   Writer
:iconchuuplz: :iconchuuplz: :clap: :clap:
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:iconsugarbit:
SugarBit Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read ^_^
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DemoniqueAlma Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That's really cute and cool keep up the good work.^^
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:iconfrbdn:
frbdn Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
waw..i read it again and again...^^
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:icontheluminary:
theLuminary Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
sahweet
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:iconinofan13:
Inofan13 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
such a cute poem! i love the art! :)
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:iconbiodire:
BIOdire Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
You used drowned and confounded as though they rhymed, I'm a little bit confused... But the poem is great, and the illustrations are quite fantastic. It's cute (:
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Artemisa3000 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
this is so cute! n_n
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:iconkiraxp:
KiraXP Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I LOVED IT!!!! :)
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:iconinkyrabbit:
inkyrabbit Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student
this is so cute and great
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:iconthewhitejewel:
TheWhiteJewel Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I agree with the girl; I love rain too! I won't let it spoil my day. :)

I loved the writing and the rhyming, it felt like I was reading a good children's book.
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Simply beautiful :heart:
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:iconlucyjewel:
lucyjewel Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cute cute cute cute!!!! Nice job! Wow! Im very amazed!
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:iconpillowsntofu:
PillowsnTofu Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist
This reminds me of a quote I saw once: "You say you love the rain and yet you bring an umbrella when it showers"
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Fantasy-JG Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist
Awwww! ;w; That is the sweetest thing!

I love your drawings too!
But i still don't like rain.
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha Thank you! :)
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Fantasy-JG Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist
No problem! ^^
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:iconstealthyninja21:
stealthyninja21 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
i love the artowrk and the story was really cute ^^
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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sweet22heart Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Lovely poem and illustration. :D I felt the meaning behind the poem. :dance:
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