The ending made it, I'll tell you that. I was reading, thinking, hey, this is pretty cute, and then - bam - those last two lines. I laughed so hard. I never thought I'd say this to anyone, but you made narcissism pretty adorable. Also, the title. I love the title. I've never seen anything like this poem, or any of your other works. A lot of poets write 'woe is me' stuff, but your poetry is quirky and fun. I totally love it!
Aaahhh, the way this speaks to me! >w< I wish sometimes I could just gaze at someone in class without being noticed, without a friend nudging my shoulder and asking if I admire them, without the gasp from those who are jealous, Just peace and quiet.
Without all the drama. It's so amazing how you catch detail so simply~<3 I truly wish some people wouldn't make such a big fuss over something small >w<