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Inspiration fails to strike by Demachic Inspiration fails to strike by Demachic
Poem about feeling no inspiration! >.<

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Other poems by me :)

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FridgePoetProject Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Love this!
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LoveyLoo Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so true. xD
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TheNSK-NaruSasyKins Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem just described me expect for the part where you suddenly something cathes your eye. I'll stand up, walk away and nothing will happen. So much for my inspiration.
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SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I find inspiration in the most insignificant of places, that's why I love it so much. :)
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efshop008 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
thank you
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looksharp Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
I had finally hit rock bottom this helped me back to my feet now there is no turning back no pressure just check it out
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Relatable!!!!! :) Job well done!
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TigerLove566 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats Really Cute And TotallyAwsome and How Im Feeling RIGHT NOW!!!! >m<
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Reverie-On-Acid Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can relate! Nice job!
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ZiraHZ Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i was trying to write something and looked around random things on dA and i saw this, then after it i decited to stand up and look around, i saw a pic of a sunflower and then i was like "I'll do a russia x reader" and then i did it :XD:
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raize Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Very nice, except that the end message to this is a bit off. The idea you seem to express in the beginning is that inspiration can come when you least expect it or at random. The person in the poem is going to give up and then inspiration strikes, so saying not to give up doesn't really make sense...

Still very nice though, no matter how anyone chooses to translate it :) Sometimes you come across the most amazing things when you are not even looking for them.
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SkittleBug64 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just LOVE all of your poems!!!
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missgendaispeaker Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
finally someone who understands meeeh!!
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skittykitty-13 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
i fell like that alot ^-^
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stealthyninja21 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
i can relate. ^_^
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LoneWolfArtist Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
same and instead of giving up I ruin the whole thing by drawing somthing random that didn't come into my mind and i end up wasting exspensive sketch paper or lined paper :/ XD
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TheWolfsFriend Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha. That's how I feel when I open my sketchbook. I just sit there, pencil in hand, drawing nothing, for about five minutes; and then when I go to put it away, BOOM there's something there that even I can't believe it came from me, it's so good.
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DRACOICE Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
I get that often, but it's harder to find the object of inspiration. :noes:
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LillyPool7 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
So simple, use inspiration as a inspiration...GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *awwwwplz
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shadowiscool123 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes, everybody does it :( it's sort of weird but sometimes i scribbles shapes on a paper and make some pictures out of them.
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nohlja Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
First of, I love how you present your poems! I think it'll be a great way to get me motivated to draw little sketches that match my poems =)
Secondly, most importantly, the flow is wonderful, and you never see good poems about being un-inspired. They're generally too dark or moody, but this one captures it best!
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underdogsrule Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student General Artist
cute!
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DreamsphereINC Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student General Artist
I hate when i despriatly want to animate a song and i have no motivation or inspirsrion to do it >n<"
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akurokuxigdem Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this happens to me all the time!
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JirachitheGreat Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your poetry has a better rhythm than many poets on DA.
Very nice.
:D
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JirachitheGreat Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have a better rhythm than many poets on DA.
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WazzinGator Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this. <3
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belladandy Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
lovely
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Rai-Kawaii Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
i like :)
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Demachic Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank yah!
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Rai-Kawaii Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
Ur welcome :3
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JessieBlackBunny Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Student
That's what happens to me all the time I will be sitting there for what feels like hours with no motivation and no inspiration then I get frustrated and just get up and when I am about to leave I get a bunch of ideas and run right back and let the ideas flow onto the paper x3
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youngyeller Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow i love your poems! :D
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Demachic Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :)
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Chyna-Angel-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh wow! Great poem! :D I love the way it flows
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Demachic Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :)
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Chyna-Angel-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D You're welcome!
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Mymagic1212 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I actually wrote a poem for one of my assignments at school based on me not having inspiration and in the end i say

"Turns out my inspiration was not having it at all"

xD
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AnneLundberg Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, you described it perfectly ^.^ I think every artist out there knows what you mean!
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Demachic Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle: Thank you :)
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Kristen1998 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
cool i love it!
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ItachiFanGirl324 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
I love all your poems they are so cute and imaginitive~
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Alura-the-Sage Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're lying in your poem because you were inspired to write this poem! XD
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Emma-Freja Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww... I just read all your poetries. I just love them, they're soo cute :)
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