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Love :not: Really by Demachic Love :not: Really by Demachic
:shrug: It wasn't true love if you fell out of it and couldn't get it back! :heart:

- just to say, I am referring to romantic love. Not like friendly or family love.

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:iconhamtona:
hamtona Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love the font and colors :)
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Toshiros24 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Photographer
What if it was true love & they couldnt forgive u?

But now reading what I just said, I understand because that means it was real for me but not 4 him </3

Thats pretty sad, thank gawd I'm not crying over him anymore, eh? :]
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stuckinthemedium Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Don't cry from pain. If he can't forgive you then that's his fault. Not yours
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eeyoh Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love this.
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rosethorn1 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i agree. good poem.
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Harlequin-Elle Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
Interesting poem, but very simplistic. Love is much more complex than this.
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MyBlankPages Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
So false!

True Love's as ephemeral as any other, if "I can't love you the way I did before" I'll love you in a new and better way!
Don't you dare say I never loved you to begin with, that's a monstrous thing to say to someone, and moreover it's not true! I loved you with all my heart, but you were difficult - I was difficult - it was difficult, and I'm sorry, but love doesn't whitewash the world!
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Bunnairry Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so beautiful
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gruaige-doiteain Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i gotta say tho, you can fall back in love with some1 and it will be different anyway. bc u both change when u fall out of love.... :/ cool concept tho :)
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shrekm456 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
(:
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:icondekler:
Dekler Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Read the green words.
Trololol.
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kindfullove12 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student General Artist
That was him, probably.
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Rosewolf12 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
I disagree, I believe all love is true, there are just types of love. There's the love that lasts forever, and the love that doesn't, but it's still true love.
But that's just my opinion. Besides that, I like the style and the conversation method this poem is written in. It's different, I like it :)
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Cresent-filled-night Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yah, one-sided feeling make you feel like shit.
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LilacPetals Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Fallen love lost it scaled before find it I can't love you before never loved me begin with? ... Wait wut?
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unknownperson123 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
its more of a script then a poem. Just think of it as dialogue.
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LilacPetals Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh~ Okay then.
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CowsBark Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This sort of goes with how I feel right now. ^^ Just got dumped a week ago by someone I've been in love with for a long time. We had been dating for more than a year, but all of a sudden, he loves somebody else.
Beautiful poem. Strikes a lot of emotion. :)
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Xenn000 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Weird how this fits perfectly into my life right now.
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PixieRain Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is what I was feeling.. o v o
Wow.. you are too beast for words x'D
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MajesticStallion Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Once again, a short poem with so much meaning :) And this is so true... Good job!
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Terrajaide Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Yeah, true that.
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mignesme Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
so painful to see this while i heard the exact same word. except he said : i dont know if i can love you the way i did before
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GroudonMcL Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011   General Artist
=) !!!!!!!!
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SallyDaVE Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
I was in this sistuation a while ago~
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emo-ninja-kid Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Too true, though some days I really wish it wasn't.
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thornakasuzuki Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
it's cool
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Calfuray Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
It's a beautiful poem, but I think love is a bit more complicated than that. I don't believe falling out of love means that you never loved the person to begin with. A lot of things happen throughout your life. Things you can't always control, and sometimes your feelings just change. It can happen for any number of reasons. Maybe it was provoked by a certain incident or maybe it was just something that happened gradually over time.
I wouldn't say that I don't believe in "true love", but I'm probably a bit more realistic about than some people.
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classy-dame Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011   Digital Artist
Amen. It's excusable though, because the author is younger and doesn't have as expansive of a view on love as an adult who's been through the wringer a few times.
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ChoqueFrontal Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Thumb up for that ^^
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lunascapes Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so true. Even in the worst of fights when you love someone... you still can't help, in the end, to be like I love you and then nothing else matters.
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Rogue-Knyte Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GOD I can SO relate to this! I have my fair share of men "falling out of love" with me.
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hihjkk Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Grammatical error maybe? Last line "Then you never loved me to begin with." Perhaps you meant "When"? Either way it's beautiful, (Not trying to be a troll or anything) But I do love it!
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Oppuolly Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
I think it's two people talking to each other..
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:iconhihjkk:
hihjkk Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
I didn't think about that, but very well it could be!
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Desuke-Love Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Writer
I totally agree! True love lasts forever ^^
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Cropcircledesigner Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Not sure if I get what you're saying... but you can't demand too much of love. Just because something isn't forever doesn't mean it wasn't real...
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Rogue-Knyte Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is for someone who has fallen out of love with someone. Not someone who couldn't be with someone else because of circumstances. I think she's refering to two people loving each other and despite the relationship going well one of the two started to feel different about the other. And if that is the case it never was love to begin with.
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Cropcircledesigner Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
...how could they have loved each other or fallen out of love if there was no love to begin with? In order to lose something you have to have had it.
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Rogue-Knyte Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Because one person can love someone and the other just doesn't reciprocate those feelings. It happens all the time. Anyone is capable of loving another, but it doesn't mean they will love them back. I think that's what the writter meant. That's my take on it anyways. Cause I've been on the tail end of this experience.
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MississippiMudPie Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
you put the words out of my mouth. I was thinking the same and didn't know how to say it, so thanks for doing it for me ;)
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Cropcircledesigner Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
That's nice to hear, thank you (:
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ObliviousDoll Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I just went through this..Built me up so high and part of me knew I couldn't love him, but I tried because he made me think he did..Then through a note in class he broke my heart and got over it in 2 days time, while I tried to make it work. I chased the man who said he would never let me go; the man who I thought I would never want to hold. How ironic is that? =/
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olciasmile Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist
Not always true ):
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Sibeemho Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
If this is true, then I've never been loved...
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some1eleven Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
As much as I like most of your works, I wonder if I'm the only person who feels hurt after reading it. Only a little hurt, though :aww:
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