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My Hearts out of Focus by Demachic My Hearts out of Focus by Demachic
A little story to go with this :)

A person I got very friendly with just before the summer, decided for some reason that they no longer wanted to associate with me. I am pretty lost as to what I could've done.

I'm a little less in the dark about the whole thing but at some point during the summer something switched. :/ Unfortunate as that is, what's more unfortunate for me was the amount of damage that issue was causing me throughout the last few weeks.

My heads been somewhere else, along with my emotions being a bit out of whack.

The problem still isn't solved as they don't wanna speak to me and I don't know about approaching them. I don't even know what I'd say to them if I did. :shrug:

But I Hit a bit of a realization the other day. I was trying to make un-related decisions regarding other people and school and such and I was just in a bad way doing them. I wasn't able to figure out the right choices because my mind and my heart were out of sync and focus. I need to sort out this problem before I can approach other issues with more clarity.

It's like a screw is loose in a massive machine: Im having a hard time finding it, but until I find it and tighten the bolts, the machine won't run smoothly. :faint:

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Hope you like this anyway!!! :hug:
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:iconkodi111:
Kodi111 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Student Photographer
The art work in and of itself is lovely, but the accompanying words really made me think.
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:iconthegirlfromindonesia:
thegirlfromindonesia Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Cute writing and nice statement! (:
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KindCritic Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student Writer
The veracity, oh the veracity of this statement.
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TheSubWoofa Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
My hearts in focus; that's how I think.
Possibly my minds out of Sync; what I think.
On this Earth that's out of Sync. :)
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cosmicraye Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
The right words, at the right time! Thanks!
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AskCrystalAndNeon Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ermuhgerd. I love these rhymes.
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:iconprancingdeer722:
prancingdeer722 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Photographer
so colorful! really nice!
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:iconinofan13:
Inofan13 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
All your poems remind me of Dr. Seuse poems! :) your poems are very lovely and inspiring! <3
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:iconrpbogal:
RPbogal Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thts so cute and clever :D
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stealthyninja21 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
yo, i hope you find the "screw loose in the machine and tighten the bolts" :)
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chibi27 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student
Nice
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DAWN2356 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow this relates to something that happened to me recently, at school we were doing a test i couldnt think of anything exept for my crush <3
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xNovenusPrimex Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have no idea how to respond to this really. But I'm sorry that your friend(s?) is(are?) ignoring you...
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TheWolfsFriend Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The poem seems like something out of a Dr. Seuss book. And unfortunately, a similar thing is going on between my friend and one of her friends.
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PzychoTwist Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The illustrated poetry is very charming, for lack of a better word. I like it. (Good luck)
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AlternateAray Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
If you are still having problems please note me. I have some experience with rather upsetting circumstances. I might be qble to help a bit. I wish to help. I'll be your friend when you don't have one. :) I'd really love to help. I kinda need a friend too...
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think i'm feeling better now about, but thank you very much :) I will keep you in mind! :hug:
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AlternateAray Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Yeah, no problem! And aw! Thanks!
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EarthGirl123 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If there was a way I could get this image printed onto a t-shirt, just for myself and not to sell to anyone else, would I have your permission? Also, how COULD I get this printed to a shirt? XP
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abdogh99 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
doctor sues is that you? just kidding i love it!
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha thank you :)
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djfj16 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh i know this feel. thankfully i have somewhat been able to pull myself out of the rut. not the first time of pulling myself out of something because really no one cares. ive also learned that if you shut out the world (if you can, not everyone is capable of this....) and focus on what happened, its easier to confront the issue head on. its not easy as pie, its still a challenge, but sometimes it needs to be done. best of luck :hug:
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Mistreena Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: This story reminds me of of something that happened to me this past summer. I hope you can find that "loose screw" and put your life back in order again. It's hard to do, but with perserverance and an open mind, you can do it :)

PS - I love the way you wrote this with pictures to emphasise the words :)
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LoveRocketsMay Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
I ADORE YOUR POEMS!
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Shizuka-Ayasato Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah...something like this happened to me two years ago...

Beautiful by the way :)
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ICantGiveCredit Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Easy! I don't :D
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mintje Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
got kind of the same problem at the moment ... Good luck <3 Hugs
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good luck to you too! :hug:
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:iconmintje:
mintje Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Thank you ^_^
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FelixNovio Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is EXCALY whats happened to me.. :(
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
; n ; I'm sorry to hear that!!
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Mallowballon Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
amazing!
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot! :)
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Raevnir Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
I like this especially because of your comment. Not to be mean or anything, it's just that I can relate a bit. Hope it goes well and that you feel better soon.
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :) :hug:
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm in a bit of the same pickle myself with a dear comrade of mine. While walking to the bus one afternoon, I was happily minding my own business and then she assumes I'm giving her the silent treatment just because I didn't greet her at the time. Now she's grown icy cold towards my whole being and has recently made a new best friend at work.

:shrug: I don't see what her problem is and I don't care.

As for your drawing thing, I can easily relate. :huggle:
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BookWormMK Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This little illustrated message is very cute- I know what's behind it isn't, but it is.
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :) :hug:
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BookWormMK Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
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shessyluvsrin Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's like your reading my mind! I might share with my someone so they understand better. I'm sorry to hear that happened to you, I hope your doing better now! :hug:
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot! :) I am :)
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whodyathink Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're brilliant!
-SK
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot! :)
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whodyathink Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's only the truth...:D
-SH
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lovely style and meaningful words. Well done!
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot! :)
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
no prob
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rainbowpearls Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
true!
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Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot! :)
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CaringheartTTR Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really beautiful poem :heart:
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