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Optimistic Heart by Demachic Optimistic Heart by Demachic
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all :iconyeahplz::heart::heart::heart:


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper :iconilikeitplz: ahahahaha

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Other poems by meee :)

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:iconwolfgirlartist:
Wolfgirlartist Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love love love the poems you write and the little pics beside them!!Blush 
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ilove-the-craft-team Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love it!!! you made my day 100% better!!
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:iconris03:
Ris03 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Made my day. 
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Ask-TheWonderfulOCs Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cutest thing ever, this is totally me :heart: !!
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
LOOOVVEEEE IITTT!!! Another A+(biggest # u can think of=#of+'s!!)
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:iconamaysie:
Amaysie Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
1: Totally -.-
2: Naah i can rhyme...
3: I love that one xD
4: I'm forgetful...wait...what was i about to say?
5: Sometimes :/
6: You BET! XDDD
7: Oh god....
8: Pass.
9: I don't think so...i have always wanted to be a writer :meow:
10: Well THAT'S true.
11: I don't know anything about poetry :I
12: Yeah i'm an optimstic person :meow: :meow:
13-14: Yeah i'm from Denmark...
15-16: Hey that's what my cutie mark means! :O
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:iconkelskar:
kelskar Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you are a totally random hero
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creativemikey Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Professional Photographer
This has been featured here - [link]
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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AnimeFreak369 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so amazingly true for me! :3 I still post poetry on here even though i suck at it
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TheDarthFlorance Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
YAY, I LIKE YOUR JACK BLACK GIF.
I also like the poem, but poems in general don't compare to Jack Black. :P
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deviousrain Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're awesome!
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:iconladybelikov:
LadyBelikov Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Love your poems :)
Pretty cute and simple!
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:icondemoniquealma:
DemoniqueAlma Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Gosh i need to work at this to.D:
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stealthyninja21 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
i get this. i totally understand. haha, and you know what, im struggling with an english assignment now. thanks for the optimistic words!
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seahorses-fly-away Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
this is like my life story. so cool
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Little-Bird-Studio Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poetry is truely amazing :heart:
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:iconthewolfsfriend:
TheWolfsFriend Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The last line hit me especially. To me, that means don't give up on it until you've given it a chance, and even then don't give up.
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:iconbunny-xd:
Bunny-XD Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student General Artist
wow. *speechless*
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :)
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Crow1412 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
This was amazing :)
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :)
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BlackRoseMelody Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
This is really cool! Your amazing! Would mind looking at my poems? I mean they're probably not as good as yours but I'd love to get feedback from an awesome writer like you!
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NarissatheHedghog Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
pfft, you're not awful or bad or terrible in any way! You're awesome!!
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:'] Thank you!! :)
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NarissatheHedghog Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome ^^
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msmusic137 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are absolutely, positively, without a doubt A M A Z I N G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :)
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msmusic137 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!:D
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Devil-Black-Heart Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
So true X3 its just me
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :)
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neahung Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
amazing~
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :)
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DogsTeeth Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love these so much >//< So Inspiring :heart:
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :)
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DogsTeeth Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course! <3
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manathequeen Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Writer
I love this poem! So true for me...
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :)
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karabasik17 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student Writer
I feel the same! I'm just terrible with grammar and spelling. And still I love to write.
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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HGKitty Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist
I love this! I have the same problem! but I love to write! this really makes me happy knowing that even if I am not good I should never give up! thank you so much! :iconiloveyouplz:
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:icondemachic:
Demachic Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle: Thank you! :)
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HGKitty Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist
its so great
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